You recently did a short cookery course. The school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my sincere thanks to our beloved staff members and their dedication and extended support as well. It is a great opportunity to complete the course here and feel blessed to have

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a kind of you everyone, we enjoyed every moment throughout the course. Early days of the course, I was nothing and do not know anything about basic cookery things and did not even have any idea of the western style of cooking.

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, I learned a lot about domestic and international cooking styles and

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I got good command of pizza making with different vegetables. As you know, the local hotels are updating with different kinds of vegetable food items.

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, I would suggest you to please include some vegan related courses as well for the upcoming years. So that the new students will learn and upgrade their knowledge as per the industry needs. I look forward to hearing your response to

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suggestion. Hope

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will be done soon. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Mon Jun 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

174 words

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