Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that most individuals prefer advanced technology for studying these days. So, spending funds on the preservation of
libraries
is useless. I agree with the above statement because most people are busy and have no time
to go to specific places to study and plenty of information is available at just a touch of a button. I will discuss this
in detail in my essay below.
To begin
with, as we are living in the modern era where everything is based on modern science the concept of studying books
is almost going to vanish in the coming years. People are so busy because of their hectic work schedules and academic studies
. Therefore
, they are more focused on online stuff available on the internet as it is readily available and no one is bound to go to libraries
to borrow books
. Many students, like in Pakistan, are trying to go abroad for higher education so they need different books
to study instead
of going to libraries
they easily find the study material online and they easily ace their exams due to
the help of the books
that are online available.
Secondly
, there is a sea of knowledge available on the internet and one can learn every technique and information with just a touch of a button. There is no hassle of going to libraries
and making time
for studies
there instead
, they can easily search online and get all the related information in seconds without moving from their place. In European countries, most folks are busy with their work so they don't have time
to go to libraries
for studies
they can easily search for online material while
they are at work and can start reading there also
if they get time
. However
, it is beneficial for the students who are doing part-time
jobs and they are also
focussing on their studies
without going to libraries
.
In conclusion, although
libraries
have been significant in the past time
. But in present days the weightage of online books
is greater than libraries
. Therefore
, it is better to facilitate our young generations more and allocate funds for software agencies to create new stuff that will be helpful for new generations.Submitted by aimenmalik2021 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Work on developing a clear and consistent structure throughout your essay that guides the reader seamlessly from one point to the next. Make sure each paragraph presents a central idea and that your argument develops logically from the introduction to the conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Strengthen the link between your main points and the supporting details or examples. Each paragraph should clearly address the prompt, providing evidence or reasoning that directly supports your stance. Improve your paragraphs by including topic sentences that summarize the main idea, followed by explanations or examples that reinforce your points.
task achievement
Clearly address the essay prompt in the introduction and directly state whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Throughout the essay, focus on developing a comprehensive discussion that fully explores your viewpoint. Make sure to address potential counterarguments to enhance the depth of your analysis.
task achievement
Enhance the clarity of your ideas by providing clearer, more direct expressions. Where possible, use specific examples to illustrate your points and avoid making generalized statements without sufficient backing. Ensure your ideas are comprehensive and fully explained for the reader.
task achievement
Incorporate relevant, specific examples to support your arguments. Instead of vaguely mentioning that technology can replace libraries, offer concrete instances of how digital resources can serve the same purposes as public libraries. Use real-world cases or research to bolster your arguments and give them more weight.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!