Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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contend about the negative influence of malls to
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on
youngters
and the general society as they are spending all their spare time Correct your spelling
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apply
this
trend explaining that these centers
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people
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To begin
with, the main reason why I do not consider that the youth spending too much time in shopping centers
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centres
represent
a threat to them is because malls can gather families and different friends in the same environment and still everyone would have fun. Correct subject-verb agreement
represents
For instance
, in my family, my older brother cannot stand football games, so it is impossible to visit a stadium with all of us or at least make it completely enjoyable. However
, a mall opens up the possibility for everyone to do something they like, thus
bringing everyone together.
Furthermore
, another cogent motive to justify why I do not believe that youngsters enjoying their whole leisure time in malls is somehow noxious is the role these centers
play in introducing new Change the spelling
centres
people
to others. More specifically, as a place that gathers a myriad of collective entertainment businesses, such
as bowling, cinema, theaters
and bookstores, it Change the spelling
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encourage
individuals to make friends with strangers just by having similar interests. Change the verb form
encourages
Therefore
, it opens the possibility of meeting new people
and developing a lifelong relationship just by crossing one anothe
or waiting in the same line.
To conclude, I strongly disagree that shopping Correct your spelling
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centers
are impacting negatively young Change the spelling
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people
and society since it allows families and friends to have fun and enjoy each other company as well as to meet new people
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