Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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people

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contend about the negative influence of malls

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youngters

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and the general society as they are spending all their spare time

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there. The paragraphs below will outline a complete disagreement toward

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trend explaining that these

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centers

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bring

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together and increase friendship and

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cycle.

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with, the main reason why I do not consider that the youth spending too much time in shopping

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a threat to them is because malls can gather families and different friends in the same environment and still everyone would have fun.

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, in my family, my older brother cannot stand football games, so it is impossible to visit a stadium with all of us or at least make it completely enjoyable.

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, a mall opens up the possibility for everyone to do something they like,

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bringing everyone together.

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, another cogent motive to justify why I do not believe that youngsters enjoying their whole leisure time in malls is somehow noxious is the role these

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centers

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play in introducing new

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to others. More specifically, as a place that gathers a myriad of collective entertainment businesses,

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as bowling, cinema,

theaters

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and bookstores, it

encourage

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individuals to make friends with strangers just by having similar interests.

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, it opens the possibility of meeting new

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and developing a lifelong relationship just by crossing one

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another

or waiting in the same line. To conclude, I strongly disagree that shopping

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are impacting negatively young

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and society since it allows families and friends to have fun and enjoy each other company as well as to meet new

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Your opinion

The overuse of plastic packaging has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments can tackle these problems

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