You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear

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John, Hope you are doing great!. I am a new neighbour writing

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letter to invite you to my house warming

ceramony

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ceremony

. I am a Software Engineer, working for one of the human capital management companies. I recently purchased and moved here with my spouse and two children. I am glad to join

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peaceful

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neighbourhood and surrounded by great people. I am hosting a party in my backyard

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Sunday and I have made

couple

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of arrangements for celebrations. In the afternoon,

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homemade

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home made

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delicous

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delicious

vegetarian and meat dishes

followed

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by mouthwatering desserts. In the

Evening

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, barbeque on the patio with chicken, corn, fish and meat dishes.

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the night, liquor and dinner

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arranged for the

long distance

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guests. I would like to invite you and your family to the event. We will try our best to keep the noise as low as possible any

inconvience

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inconvenience

please keep us posted. I hope you participate in the party and enjoy our hospitality.

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Faithfully, Rana,

Submitted by rana on Thu Jun 09 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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