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previous two decades, some people argue that mothers are excellent at parenting as compared to fathers, for these reasons, they have more responsibilities in bringing up

children

in almost all societies in the world. While other members of the populace think

otherwise

, that men are equally as good as women. I strongly believe that both males and females have the same tasks in child upbring as they together take care of the kids and sponsor their bills.

To begin

with, parenthood involves the efforts of the man and the woman, cooperating as a unit helps a lot in catering for the need of the kids. When adults put their heads together, child care becomes a very smooth and easy assignment to accomplish since they will serve as a support system, in the event one could not handle or solve a given problem the other person will give a helping hand.

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, a study carried out by an American based renowned sociologist concluded that 98% of kids raised by the collective collaboration of the two parents were noticed to be better raised than their counterparts.

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family where responsibilities

such

as payment of bills like school fees, accommodation fees etc.

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shared between husband and wife, child's training becomes an enjoyable job.

In addition

, couples will not feel the burden and the stress

that is

associated with bringing up

children

. More so that the burden is distributed across the father and the mother so everyone has a stress free time.

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, a publication in the UK journal of parenthood revealed that most families, about 90% where

children

were raised by the combined dedication of the parents had

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successful parenting. In conclusion,

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some believe that women play

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vital role in bringing up offspring. While some others feel that the father and the mother are equally important in

children

's development. I vehemently acknowledge the fact that they are significant in the same way in that they provide care as well as take up the financial responsibility of the family members