In many parts of the world, people look up their family history. Some people think that researching previous generations is a good idea but others think that it is better to be focused on the present and future generation\s. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries around the

world

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world,

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some people seek their family history . In

this

regard, some individuals believe that humans'

future

and present are essential rather than their past

while

others believe the contrary . In my opinion , I believe that the nations should

focus

on the past because it assists to develop the nation and family

future

as well . To start off , others believe that

instead

of reflecting on what happened in the past it is better to

focus

on the present and what is happening now. If there is no

focus

on what is coming now,

then

the issues will disturb the family and the

future

will be a disaster.

For example

, if parents start to

focus

on the past and neglect their children and education it could lead to a lot of problems in the

future

of the family. I believe that searching

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the past and focusing on what

is

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has

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happened is

important

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as important

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as focusing on the

future

of the family.

This

is because there are various genetic diseases which can be inherited and we can prevent

this

disorder if we give attention to the family past and family tree.

For instance

, certain types of cancer disease are inherited.

Hence

, the doctors can stop the named disease by looking at the family records and doctors can give suitable instructions to prevent any occurrences of said disease.

Therefore

looking at the past

allow

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the next generation to thrive in health. In conclusion,

although

, many people believe that looking at the

future

and present should have greater priority, I believe that searching the past records is the only way to thrive in the

future

.