More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on internet and phones. Is this a positive or negative development?

In today's world, technological advancements have been playing a big role.There is no doubt that the

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particularly

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is the most component part of our lives.In my point of view,

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argument has both benefits and drawbacks. There are many advantages to depending on the

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and

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with, the

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has ensured a wide range of knowledge for societies because communities can access various information whatever they want.

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, the young generation has been growing up with the

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and

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they are able to gain beneficial experiences in school

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or daily

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, Owing to cell

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, Communities can contact each other easily.

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, they call and text message whomever they want.Web and

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are quicker parts than some of the parts.

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,

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possess global news because of social media.Shortly,

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and

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lead to several points in

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,

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reach and connect with each other and the world.

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, there are many drawbacks to depending on the

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and

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.The technological era brings about many problems.

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of all, the use of too many

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and the

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causes especially technological devices addiction to impact

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their own health.To illustrate, if

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use too many devices and

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, that population may face eye disorders or obesity problems as they addict to

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and the

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, the

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is sometimes a waste of time in terms of unnecessary parts.

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, using social media may provide the population with bad effects.

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, children are at risk because of the

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.The

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has several kinds of anything and sometimes children expose to violent pictures, and games.

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, their psychology and behaviours are affected overly bad way. In conclusion, technology has vital aspects for human

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.Some communities become overly dependent on the

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and phone.I think

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people

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should use to

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and

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but they should

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a balanced.They gain benefits for their own

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