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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Staying in life is so complicated if you live abroad. It brings essential communication and social issues. Being a foreigner living abroad, you need to be familiar with it. Else you have to face the consequences not only socially but
also
 practically as well. If the folk with citizenship are friendly and helpful, some problems can be fixed as soon as possible. But I fully agree with
this
 notion for the following reasons.
To begin
 with, if the population live in another
country
 without do not know the
country
's primary
language
, how they can find a way when they want to go out. Luckily everywhere in the world has the internet, but if the
country
 does not it. Society should follow road signs, and how can they track without knowing the
language
 of that
country
. They can get lost in the street.
Additionally
, all the local shops and vendors speak their native
language
;
hence
 shopping will be hard if
people
 do not know the
language
 or the currency can be different.
Moreover
, one of the problems is finding a friend. Even
people
 try to talk without knowing each other's
language
. To be a friend is very hard if you do not know other
people
's mother tongue. Talking with other
people
 is the one crucial necessary human life. Do not understand other
people
 causes psychological problems. To conclude, living abroad is complicated even if somebody knows the
country
's
language
 because of cultural differences. Living without knowing another
country
's speech will be complex for the masses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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