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People are against the legalization of euthanasia while other people support it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #legalization #euthanasia #support
Euthanasia
 is a very emotional topic to discuss,
Legalization
 is
right
 and wrong at the same time.
legalization
 of
euthanasia
 for certain diseases is appropriate , is by helping someone
to
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eliminate suffering and
pains
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pain
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. To be part of the other
people
 against
euthanasia
 , it can be understandable to .its part of their moral and
belives
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beliefs
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 that put them to go against of taken another
person
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person's
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life
.
firstly
 ,
people
 who are against
euthanasia
 , are the ones who have faith . They think by taken someone's
life
 is a sin against God and immoral , every person has the
right
 to live till the
end
 of his or her
life
 comes to an
end
. we are made regularly toward the lord almighty . even though you see your love in an acute stage of sickness , you prefer to give them love and courage
til
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 their
life
 ends. in another part ,
people
 who are for the
legalization
 of
euthanasia
 . it seems to them is the easy way to
end
 your
life
 without any suffering or pain. Sendly
legalization
 of
end
 of death is common in western counties. Counties like America, Canada and many Europan countries have legalized
euthanasia
 . In ,Denmark
people
 apply to
end
 their
life
 on a daily basis. But Country like is still not automatic to get the
right
 to
end
 your
life
. In
Concluson
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Conclusion
 , Both those against and supporting
euthanasia
is
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are
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 correct, no one is
right
 or wrong.
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