Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

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The news of
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, robberies, murders etc., are very common nowadays in the big cities and has reportedly increased during the past few years.The majority of these
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are committed by youngsters and
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is an issue of serious concern.In the following paragraphs, I will try to discuss the potential reasons and
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will give some suggestions to combat
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problem. The
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and foremost reason for the
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committed by
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is unemployment.
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, India is the
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most populated country in the world and due to overpopulation the job opportunities for young people are very limited and they are tempted to do
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for money.
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, In many countries, some addictive
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and weapons are legal and young people do not hesitate to take those
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when they get addicted to those
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they step into the world of
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for
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and money.To illustrate, In the United State of America and In Canada,
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like marijuana and weed are legal, and most of the young population take those
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and weapons are legal in the U.S.A which promotes
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in
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.If these had not been legal in these countries
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the
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rates would not have been
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high. Now, let's talk about the solutions in order to demolish
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pressing issue.
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, there should be a complete ban on
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and weapons in all countries which encourages the
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to do
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.
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, education should be given in the schools to youngsters about the negative effects of
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on their lives and health.
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, movies which showcase violence and guns should not be released and should be banned by the censor board. Because these movies have
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a very bad impact on the youngster's mind and thoughts. To sum up,
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is true that due to overpopulation, lack of interest in education in the
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and due to media the involvement of young people in
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has increased.But,
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can be better stopped or can be decreased by the involvement of parents and the state.
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