Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness. Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?
In
this
commercial world, some people
measure everything in terms of economy
. Some economists claim that Correct article usage
the economy
happiness
can be achieved using money and some individuals deny that viewpoint. In my perspective, knowledge and happiness
do not rely on financial status rather it is depends
on human Change the verb form
depends
health
and milestone achievements.
To commence with, one cannot deny that wealth can buy comfort but not health
. To explain more, some people
can be a
rich but unhappy due to their ill Correct article usage
apply
body
. To illustrate, some Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
people
might have a lot of bank balance but that will not save their lives when their crucial internal organs Add a missing verb
are damage
damage
, Wrong verb form
damaged
as a result
, they lose happiness
. On the other hand
, some citizens who are in
below Change preposition
apply
poverty
line or Correct article usage
the poverty
middle class
families spend their quality time with their family and friends Add a hyphen
middle-class
happily
as they have Replace the word
happy
a
good Remove the article
apply
health
. To provide a practical example, recently the Srilankan government is facing bankruptancy
, Correct your spelling
bankruptcy
however
, their citizens do not lose their hope and happiness
as they have good health
. Thus
, this
is one of the reasons our ancistors
often used Correct your spelling
ancestors
proverb
"Correct article usage
the proverb
health
is wealth".
Besides
health
, some people
celebrate different occassions
for their shot and Correct your spelling
occasions
long term
accomplishments in various stages of their life irrespective of Add a hyphen
long-term
thier
economic stability. Correct your spelling
their
For instance
, students celebrate when they achieve desired
grade, employees party Correct pronoun usage
their desired
their
promotions, parents organize Change preposition
for their
event
for their Add an article
an event
the event
first
baby and many more goalposts that makes human beings happier are
Unnecessary verb
apply
keep
motivated. These small or big achievements keep Wrong verb form
kept
people
happier which are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
no where
related to their revenue. Join the words
nowhere
Similarly
, when we consider happy citizens they are everywhere from below poverty
countries to developed nations even though they do not have access to basic Add a hyphen
below-poverty
necessaties
.
Correct your spelling
necessities
Finally
, to recapitulate, some believe money can buy everything in life; however
, personally
money is just one factor that sometimes helps to buy comforts but not enjoyment Replace the word
personal
rather
human feelings, family, well-being and milestone accomplishments that contribute to laughter.Correct word choice
but rather
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