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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

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In
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 contemporary era, wherever the advent of technology has impacted
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humans
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life
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 in a positive and negative
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. As long as media-related materials have changed enormously compared to the past. Even though some argued that in the near future
newspapers
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 and other printed materials will vanish among the communities and they will attain to use internet facilities to acquire new alerts.
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, I completely disagree with the above statement and in
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 I will elaborate on my opinion.
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 with, whenever people are always trying to give priority to traditional media-related materials especially, the
newspapers
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 and magazines.
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the India survey shows that in 2015,
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newspapers
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 printed companies had tried to ensure 80% of manufacturers because of the high demand among the Indian society.
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, the public has
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 affordability to buy these products
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 cheaper prices rather than electronic methods.
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, people have been facing
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internet errors in digital equipment when they are able to get knowledge through these types of resources.
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, folk who were in rural areas faced poor signal connections and they
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 willing to use
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anymore.
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, they believe that
newspapers
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 are the best way to resource compared to the internet as well as it emphasized these printed products are
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 reliable as well as more convenient for them . In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe advancement in technology has not
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 to change human's regular reading habits and using
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 and magazines while some communities are able to use technological facilities with money payments
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 the majority of
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 humans have tried to acquire
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 articles. if people give their concern to
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 newspaper culture, we will unable to forget about it in our lifetime.
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