some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. how might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life can make people happy?

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while some adopt the view that the basic way to be glad during heart is to have an area of funds.
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, a number of experts and citizens believe it is not true and to have a nice soul we do not need an area of the capital.Let us discuss it in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
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whit,I have been living in a developing city and I can see some citizens who have bill make a perfect life for themself and I believe that a part of capital is essential for everyone that have a nice life and about among that I should say the people must have some stuff.
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, house and car and work and money for buy everything
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as clothes or even ticket for travel.As you know money can help people in different positions and
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, too difficult situations.
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, when you want to help another inhibition or if you want to make several statuses for yourself.
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, I consider that just having a field of funds alone cannot be adequate for all positions during growth.If you ask me I should say coins can solve some problems not all of them,
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some stuff.
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, time never buying for cash.having a much deposit is important for everyone that has a fab living so to me have special stuff
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as health or family or safety life is vital for have to feel happy and after that to my mind, money has a full power so you can have lots of things and buy them for a fee. In conclusion, In my own ,opinion much deposit can make a superb day and future and it has been necessary for the inhibition but it is not all of them for having a fantastic growth and some things can not be done with coins.To my mind, the government should spend time on the growing culture of the family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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