A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, - Describe what this book was about - Explain how this book influenced you - Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to tell you about an autobiography of Adolf Hitler named Mein Kamph which I would like to recommend for your article related to the most influential
book
for your
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magazine. The
book
is written by
Mr.
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Adolf Hitler, a Monarch of Germany and he was one of the main
person
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in
the
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WWII. Indeed,
this
book
contains a myriad of incidents that changed his personality from a kind person to a cruel one. Basically, I have been impressed with his thought process and
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as he took over the command of Germany in Just two years and many more incidents that have changed my opinion about life.
Thus
, I can assure you that if you select
this
book
for your article, it will not only encourage other people about how to deal with various harsh conditions in a better way but
also
it will enlighten them with multifarious reasons why people become cruel. Indeed,
this
book
is worth reading and
recommend
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to your readers. I hope you will consider my point at the time of finalizing the
book
. Thank you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown
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