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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, - Describe what this book was about - Explain how this book influenced you - Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter to tell you about an autobiography of Adolf Hitler named Mein Kamph which I would like to recommend for your article related to the most influential
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 for your
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new
 magazine. The
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 is written by
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 Adolf Hitler, a Monarch of Germany and he was one of the main
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WWII. Indeed,
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book
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 contains a myriad of incidents that changed his personality from a kind person to a cruel one. Basically, I have been impressed with his thought process and
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hard work
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hard work
 as he took over the command of Germany in Just two years and many more incidents that have changed my opinion about life.
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, I can assure you that if you select
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book
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 for your article, it will not only encourage other people about how to deal with various harsh conditions in a better way but
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 it will enlighten them with multifarious reasons why people become cruel. Indeed,
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 is worth reading and
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 to your readers. I hope you will consider my point at the time of finalizing the
book
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. Thank you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown
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