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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

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After finishing schooling, young individuals nowadays prefer living away from their
parents
 and in many nations, they often live with their
friends
 on a sharing basis. I vehemently espouse that
this
 is certainly a positive approach to
make
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 them
self dependent
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 and maintain
privacy
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the privacy
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 of their
life
.
To begin
 with,
self dependent
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behavior
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 has not become famous among youngsters for no reason. To explain, a survey conducted by the Guardian Newspaper in March 2015 revealed that 65% of young
people
 were keenly interested in living separately from their
parents
 because they felt a sense of
self dependency
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 at the time
of
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staying with
friends
.
Hence
,
this
 trend may provide them
enough
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 chances to deal with
day to day
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 issues without
parents'
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their parents'
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 help.
In addition
, since young
people
 require a certain level of privacy in their
life
, they may feel
freedom
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the freedom
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 to do anything in their
life
 without any restrictions and
this
 will lead them to a better
life
 ahead. On the other side, a number of
people
 raise a concern about their relationship with
parents
 because staying with
friends
 can restrict them from opening up in front of
parents
 which may bring bad communication and
low
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 level of bonding with their
parents
.
Moreover
, security issues are tremendously higher
while
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 staying out with
friends
 for young
people
. As if young
people
 live with their
parents
, they do not need to worry about their safety.
Thus
, 13000 cases in the year
of
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2017 in the USA,
such
 as robbery, rape and molestation have been reported by the Department of Police with young individuals who opted
residing
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 with
friends
 than with
parents
. To conclude, it is unequivocal that
such
 a phenomenon of living away from
parents
 to stay with
friends
 on a sharing basis is conducive for young
people
 to be independent and live their
life
 with no interference.
Hence
,
this
 is indeed a positive development.
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