Some people think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals reckon that single
planet
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government
goverment
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government
is better than country
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governments
goverments
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governments
.
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of
this
statement and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of
world
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a world
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united
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government
goverment
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government
are the unification of
humanity
and
an
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the
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absence of any war conflicts.
Firstly
, the
manace
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menace
of nuclear war and
death
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the death
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of whole
humanity
because of
this
would disappear. If
one
united
government
appears, it will bring peace around the
world
. Because
humanity
would be united,
hence
government
would decide any problems that may appear.
For
instance
, in
sci-fi
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a sci-fi
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book by Stephen King, he described the situation where the earth had
one
stable
government
and it thrived without any economical and social problems.
Secondly
,
unification
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the unification
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of
humanity
is an incredible benefit for a
planet
. All social, economical,
environmental
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and environmental
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problems that currently are
in
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on
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the earth can be decided, because
humanity
is
unificated
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unified
unification
.
For
instance
, in 2007 because of
usage
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the usage
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of some special minerals,
the
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a
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hole in
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ozone
Ozon
ozon
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the ozon
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layer appeared.
This
could
caused
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cause
be caused
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the
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a
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disaster,
however
by
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apply
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worldwide summit
humanity
solved
this
problem.
Similarly
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,Similarly
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anything can be solved. At the same time, the
world
government
has disadvantages too,
such
as
destruction
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the destruction
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of
unique
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a unique
the unique
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culture
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cultures
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in every country and
inequality
among people.
Presumably
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,Presumably
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one
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government
goverment
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government
will stick to
one
culture and
relegion
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religion
. That may cause the deterioration of
uniqueness
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the uniqueness
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of every nationality
in
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on
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planet
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the planet
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.
For
instance
, according to
Star
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the Star
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Wars
series
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,series
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there
was
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were
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not any special cultures
in
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on
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one
planet
, all the same people.
Moreover
,
inequality
will appear
defenetily
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definitely
.
For
instance
, according to Steve
Devis
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,Devis
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if the
one
planet
government
showed up in the future, that would cause massive
inequality
and destruction. To conclude,
although
the
world
united
government
has negative certain effects like
inequality
and deterioration of cultures, it has an extremely good
influences
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influence
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on the life of human beings like
inification
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unification
minification
of
humanity
and lack of war conflicts. To my way of thinking,
benefits
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the benefits
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outweigh
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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.
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