Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental problems are
the
major issue around the world. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, people aware
that Add a missing verb
are aware
main
natural disaster Correct article usage
the main
in
nowadays is the loss of great faunas and flora. Even though some people implicate there various other reasons especially, climatic changes. In Change preposition
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this
essay, I will discuss these two views and finally
, I will elaborate on my opinion.
To begin
with, the major reason for the extinction of animals and plants, human beings are attempting to act in a
destructive ways which are harmful Correct the article-noun agreement
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for
natural creatures. Change the preposition
to
For example
, over two years ago, a
Indonesian survey shows, that their native I du tiger had been killed by hunters Change the article
an
in
a high level because these tigers had available medicines in their body parts. Change preposition
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As a result
, when human beings have tried to kill them, particularly, these detrimental behaviours pave the way to create unbalanced food changes in ecosystem
as well as brutal competition among natural creatures .
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the ecosystem
On the other hand
, as
some Correct word choice
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group
of communities emphasized that the climatic conditions are Fix the agreement mistake
groups
the
brutal issue in every part of the world. Correct article usage
a
In addition
, the
global warming has created more negative effects Correct article usage
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in
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the
nature. For instance, in 2008, the Australian survey shows that 2999 Correct article usage
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of
total wild trees and animals were killed by Change preposition
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wild fire
. Correct your spelling
wildfire
Consequently
, wherever these climatic conditions are changed because of human's
detrimental behaviours as well as it paves the way Change noun form
human
pollute
air land and so on.
In conclusion, Fix the infinitive
to pollute
extinction
of natural trees and animalsCorrect article usage
the extinction
as well as unhealthy climatic changes
are the major environmental effects Add the comma(s)
, as well as unhealthy climatic changes,
in
our planet. If we try to alleviate these problems, we will enable to protect Change preposition
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surrounding
ecosystem. Unless we give our consciousness about Add an article
the surrounding
this
matter, we will be not able to overcome these brutal problems in our environment.Submitted by skrodrigo030 on
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