Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
The word refer doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
It appears that the form of the verb get does not work with are in this sentence.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The spelling of neighborhoods is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The word necessity doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word peoples' doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun work in your sentence. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase soil seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that healths may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
If you don’t want wealths to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It appears that wealths is an uncountable noun and should not be made plural. Consider changing the noun.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general