Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Many people
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that the waste from households which is recycled is not adequate and it is said that
this
can be resolved by the government to improve the situation. I totally agree with
this
idea to increase recycling owing to the lack of awareness and the benefits it brings. On the one hand, the foremost reason why
government
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the government

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should act
because
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inhabitants are not familiar with recycling activities.
First
, citizens
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used to throwing trash without concern
to
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for

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the pollution. Specifically, the old generation tends to burn litter as normal practices
instead
of gathering them to recycle.
Therefore
,
government
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the government

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had better launch campaigns
such
as recycling in
neighborhoods
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on a regular basis so that the frequencies can be enhanced because
this
helps heighten people’s intellect.
On the other hand
, the benefits recycling brings to us are varied. It is
of
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necessity
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to protect the ecosystem and our living areas which directly relate to
peoples’
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health.
For instance
, imposing stricter punishments can help reduce the number of people committing illegalities.
Furthermore
, recycling is not
a
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hard work with a series of easy things
such
as utilizing organic trash to make
soil
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the soil

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more fertile or reusing plastic bottles to turn them into toys and flowers vase, which are good for our
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rather than the impact that unfriendly environmentally materials poses on the environment. In conclusion, I totally agree with
this
opinion due to the lack of consciousness as well as advantages
the
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legal requirements that hold a significant position among a
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wealths
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of solutions to develop the recycling rate
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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