Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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that the waste from households which is recycled is not adequate and it is said that
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can be resolved by the government to improve the situation. I totally agree with
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idea to increase recycling owing to the lack of awareness and the benefits it brings. On the one hand, the foremost reason why
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should act
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inhabitants are not familiar with recycling activities.
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, citizens
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used to throwing trash without concern
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the pollution. Specifically, the old generation tends to burn litter as normal practices
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of gathering them to recycle.
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,
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had better launch campaigns
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as recycling in
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on a regular basis so that the frequencies can be enhanced because
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helps heighten people’s intellect.
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, the benefits recycling brings to us are varied. It is
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to protect the ecosystem and our living areas which directly relate to
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health.
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, imposing stricter punishments can help reduce the number of people committing illegalities.
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, recycling is not
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hard work with a series of easy things
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as utilizing organic trash to make
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more fertile or reusing plastic bottles to turn them into toys and flowers vase, which are good for our
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rather than the impact that unfriendly environmentally materials poses on the environment. In conclusion, I totally agree with
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opinion due to the lack of consciousness as well as advantages
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legal requirements that hold a significant position among a
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of solutions to develop the recycling rate
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Waste management
  • Mandatory regulations
  • Compliance and enforcement
  • Recyclable materials
  • Circular economy
  • Landfill diversion
  • Conservation
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sanitation services
  • Public policy
  • Behavioral change
  • Eco-consciousness
  • Resource recovery
  • Single-stream recycling
  • Waste hierarchy
  • Economic incentives
  • Ecological footprint
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