A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. write a letter to your friend. in your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvantage say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. Start your letter with Dear …………,
Dear Mark,
Good to hear from you after a long time. Two days ago I got your mail, mentioning some concerns about your upcoming summer camping. As you know I have been in
such
summer activities so I can provide you with some tips.
Going on a summer camp is not a major problem for anybody. Especially, I am sure that you will enjoy it more. During the last
camp, we stayed in tents which were built by all campers, hopefully, you will get such
a chance. Secondly
, as per your itinerary, the mentioned campsite is very close to nature, so you will get an opportunity to enjoy most of the natural views.
Though it will be a good experience, as the suggested campsite is far from the main area you have to be ready with some possible disadvantages, like sleeping in an open space so threats of small insects will be always there. Furthermore
, you all are supposed to cook for yourself, and I know how good you are at that skill.
As I feel the schedule for camping is quite interesting, and as well we have not spent some with each other for a long I would like to join this
trip.
I Hope
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further
planning.
Yours lovingly,
Jaimini.Submitted by jaimini2000 on
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coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, ensure that transitions between ideas within paragraphs are smooth, and the logical structure of the letter is clear and easy to follow. Try to stick to one main idea per paragraph to improve clarity. Use appropriate linkers to connect sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
Regarding task achievement, make sure to fully address all parts of the prompt. Include specific details and explanations to explain why the friend would enjoy camping, describe disadvantages more vividly, and express your willingness to join more directly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite