Some people believe that their teachers should not give school children homework, others believe that homework plays an essential role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Education

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is the golden key to surviving peacefully and happily. It is obvious that there are lots of debate about it. One of the debates indicates whether

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is essential or not. Some people believe that teachers should give

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children

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, others believe that it does not play an essential role in the

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of

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. I am in favour of the

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statement. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and show how important is

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in our

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system.

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of all, there is a scientific fact that the human brain loose new information in 8 hours if they do not repeat it. Because of

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fact, teachers and parents and

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their careers have to be aware of

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statement so they will understand that

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one of the best ways to repeat what we learn new at the

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.

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to that fact, there are definitions

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as short and long time memories. We all learnt from research that as long as we want to keep knowledge in our thought, we should regularly remind

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is the only way that

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things properly. In

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case,

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makes sense, in terms of reminding things. At

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but not least, having

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would be nice for

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to engage

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So we can avoid them to get harmed

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watching tv and playing computer games all evening.

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, especially in early age

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,

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might be boring for students. In primary

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, students may get bored in lessons just because of

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, parents may not have enough skills to teach their kids. At that point, they may lead kids wrong. All effort and time which is given by the teacher would be ruined at

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point.

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for sure that no one wants to ruin teachers'

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. In conclusion, neither having skilled parents nor getting bored under intense

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would not be the case for better

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. There are scientific facts which show us that

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is essential for students.

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why I strongly believe that balanced and enough

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should be given to

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by their

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teacher.