Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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world, all countries are developed

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and

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to ensure

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safety and maintain the function of

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. Some

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argue that if

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can do any things with the limitations of

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would be destroyed. I agree with

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statement with my explanations below as well as providing examples to support my opinions. To commence with, some

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receive well moral education since they are children

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who are from Japan, Taiwan, and the United Kingdom. They can follow

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on their ethics.

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in public areas without

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their low moral standards. Numerous Chinese

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throw rubbish everywhere and perform unacceptable actions to break

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, it is obvious that they can bring negative effects to the world.

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have been found that

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are collapsed.

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steal things in supermarkets, break cars with violence, and fight with each other. These situations will

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true if

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and

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are broken one day.

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, it is obvious that

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and

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are important elements in our

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. In conclusion, even though some

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may think

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affect the human rights of

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Topic Vocabulary:

social order
harmonious
individual freedoms
societal norms
unrestricted freedom
crime rates
dysfunctional
fair distribution
human rights
justice system
accountability
enforcing laws
restrictive regulations
societal functionality
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