By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that individuals who
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a murder crime should be punished by taking their souls. Others think that punishing murderers by putting them in prison is a better
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. I would agree with those who see that murderer’s life in
jail
could be the right choice.
Although
, murder crimes should be punished strongly to prevent and warn communities that it is not right to decide
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life.
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it is a strict solution to stop these crimes and no one will think it is something easy to do.
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, someone who
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to commit
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murder will think twice before doing it, because he/she knows that
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penalty is death and the life end.
This
type of punishment may save the murdered rights and respect the lost soul.
However
, it is better to punish the murderers by putting them in
jail
,
thus
it allows them to apologise for the mistakes they have done by serving their communities. After all, they are
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human beings
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human beings
too, and killing them could worsen the situation of their families.
For instance
, there are a lot of things that people in
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can volunteer to do for their communities,
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and agriculture, which it has positive effects
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themselves and the community
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to. In conclusion,
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penalty is a strong punishment to prevent
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to appear again. I believe that prisons are made so murderers
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the chance to apologise to the community through volunteer to do some jobs during
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stay in
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • irreversible
  • deterrence
  • rehabilitation
  • human rights
  • ethical dilemma
  • state-sponsored
  • vindicate
  • incarceration
  • due process
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