By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that individuals who
has
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have
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committed
comitted
a murder crime should be punished by taking their souls. Others think that punishing murderers by putting them in prison is a better Correct your spelling
committed
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decision
decesion
. I would agree with those who see that murderer’s life in Correct your spelling
decision
jail
could be the right choice.
Although
, murder crimes should be punished strongly to prevent and warn communities that it is not right to decide taking
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to take
other’s
life. Correct quantifier usage
another’s
This
because
it is a strict solution to stop these crimes and no one will think it is something easy to do. Add a missing verb
is because
For example
, someone who plan
to commit Change the verb form
plans
a
murder will think twice before doing it, because he/she knows that Remove the article
apply
their
penalty is death and the life end. Change the word
the
This
type of punishment may save the murdered rights and respect the lost soul.
However
, it is better to punish the murderers by putting them in jail
, thus
it allows them to apologise for the mistakes they have done by serving their communities. After all, they are Correct your spelling
human beings
humanbeings
too, and killing them could worsen the situation of their families. Correct your spelling
human beings
For instance
, there are a lot of things that people in jail
can volunteer to do for their communities, such
as public facilities
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facility
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maintenance
maintainance
and agriculture, which it has positive effects Correct your spelling
maintenance
toward
themselves and the community Change preposition
on
they
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to they
belongs
to.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
belong
although
death
penalty is a strong punishment to prevent Correct article usage
the death
these crime
to appear again. I believe that prisons are made so murderers Change the determiner
this crime
these crimes
has
the chance to apologise to the community through volunteer to do some jobs during Change the verb form
have
there
stay in Correct your spelling
their
jail
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