Some people say that every human being can create art (e.g. painting). Others think only 30 people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
modern era, artistic things are flourishing by leaps and bounds. Although
a group of people believe that everyone can make art
, from my perspective this
needs a special talent, which cannot be gained. My inclination is discussed in the further
essay.
On the one hand, A number of individuals think that society, who do hard work can learn any art
, such
as drawing, pottery and so on. There might be nothing, which cannot be done by hard work. For instance
, if someone is interested in playing the guitar, then
that person might learn it by spending an amount of time on it and become a guitarist. There are numerous individuals who are handicapped and still make mesmerise
paintings, which shows skill has no limits.
Wrong verb form
mesmerising
On the other hand
, I believe each and every person have
a special ability, in which they are an expert. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
For example
, A painter has your whole knowledge of painting and a sculptor has sculpturing, but they are good at their own skills. Neither a painter can make a sculpture nor a sculptor can make a painting. It is their inborn talent, besides
this
, if everyone is able to create art
, then
the whole world would be the artist, but it is not realistic. On top of this
, there are a number of artists, who demonstrated that play never learned any art
from anyone still well-known in their field, which indicates that the public is born with skills not everyone can learn.
In conclusion, even though several people argue that every human being can create art
, I believe it requires natural skills and not only people cannot be good at everything by learning it, but also
many famous personalities have proved it.Submitted by Shivuhirpara08 on
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task response
Address the prompt directly by discussing both views and giving a clear opinion. Develop each point with relevant examples and provide a balanced argument.
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