Some people say that every human being can create art (e.g. painting). Others think only 30 people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modern era, artistic things are flourishing by leaps and bounds.

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a group of people believe that everyone can make

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, from my perspective

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needs a special talent, which cannot be gained. My inclination is discussed in the

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essay. On the one hand, A number of individuals think that society, who do hard work can learn any

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as drawing, pottery and so on. There might be nothing, which cannot be done by hard work.

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, if someone is interested in playing the guitar,

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that person might learn it by spending an amount of time on it and become a guitarist. There are numerous individuals who are handicapped and still make

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paintings, which shows skill has no limits.

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, I believe each and every person

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a special ability, in which they are an expert.

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, A painter has your whole knowledge of painting and a sculptor has sculpturing, but they are good at their own skills. Neither a painter can make a sculpture nor a sculptor can make a painting. It is their inborn talent,

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, if everyone is able to create

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the whole world would be the artist, but it is not realistic. On top of

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, there are a number of artists, who demonstrated that play never learned any

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from anyone still well-known in their field, which indicates that the public is born with skills not everyone can learn. In conclusion, even though several people argue that every human being can create

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, I believe it requires natural skills and not only people cannot be good at everything by learning it, but

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many famous personalities have proved it.

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task response

Address the prompt directly by discussing both views and giving a clear opinion. Develop each point with relevant examples and provide a balanced argument.

coherence cohesion

Improve the structure of the essay by organizing ideas into clear paragraphs. Use cohesive devices, such as transition words and phrases, to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

288 words

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