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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imporse a higher tax on this kind of food. TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In certain nations, the number is burgeoning of individuals who are getting unhealthy due to having an excessive amount of junk foodstuff. While I agree that governments must increase the expense of these types of cuisine, I would argue that only
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 measures are not sufficient to improve individuals' health. Admittedly, compared to the
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 few decades
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 start having more health issues by eating junk. The reasons behind
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 a situation are an excessive amount of calories in
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 type of edible product, a sedentary lifestyle, less time for cooking meals at home, and easy to order from outside.
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, individuals are busy with their sitting jobs where they just work on screens by using their fingers but they are physically inactive.
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, ordering or getting fast meal items on the counter is more convenient because cooking at home is time-consuming.
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 makes the population more vulnerable to get the potential risks of diseases
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 as obesity, diabetes or more dangerously heart attack.
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 who have an addiction to eating fast
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 in abundance cannot easily give up by rising the tax on junk
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;
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 they need proper medical treatment and psychological guidance.
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, if health camps can be organised and pictures of obese
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 on fast
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 packaging same as on cigarettes can be presented, it will discourage an individual from having an excessive quantity of fast
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. In conclusion, having fast
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 in uncontrollable measures makes
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 sick in some countries, I do have a firm belief that with medical help and psychological advice one can change their eating habits and selection of
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 of only imposing high tax rates on these kinds of
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