In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imporse a higher tax on this kind of food. TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In certain nations, the number is burgeoning of individuals who are getting unhealthy due to having an excessive amount of junk foodstuff. While I agree that governments must increase the expense of these types of cuisine, I would argue that only
such
measures are not sufficient to improve individuals' health. Admittedly, compared to the
last
few decades
people
start having more health issues by eating junk. The reasons behind
such
a situation are an excessive amount of calories in
this
type of edible product, a sedentary lifestyle, less time for cooking meals at home, and easy to order from outside.
For instance
, individuals are busy with their sitting jobs where they just work on screens by using their fingers but they are physically inactive.
Moreover
, ordering or getting fast meal items on the counter is more convenient because cooking at home is time-consuming.
This
makes the population more vulnerable to get the potential risks of diseases
such
as obesity, diabetes or more dangerously heart attack.
Although
for reducing
such
risks governments can imply a higher tax on fast snack products, I do not believe that using
such
solutions can improve the situation.
People
who have an addiction to eating fast
food
in abundance cannot easily give up by rising the tax on junk
food
;
therefore
they need proper medical treatment and psychological guidance.
For example
, if health camps can be organised and pictures of obese
people
on fast
food
packaging same as on cigarettes can be presented, it will discourage an individual from having an excessive quantity of fast
food
. In conclusion, having fast
food
in uncontrollable measures makes
people
sick in some countries, I do have a firm belief that with medical help and psychological advice one can change their eating habits and selection of
food
instead
of only imposing high tax rates on these kinds of
food
.
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