You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

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Dear Jack, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I'm really grateful to you for spending a weekend together at your new house. Your new house is built with a modern design. I like the design of the varying shades that you’ve painted on the kitchen wall,
also
the decorated interior design of an organized room.
Moreover
, I really enjoyed visiting the Cafe, Shopping malls. During the visit to these places, I've eaten the traditional foods which were delicious and bought the traditional clothes and
also
enjoyed the amazing time together with you. As you know, my birthday is
next
month, so I will arrange a party. That's why I'd like to invite you to my birthday party at my house. Hope you will come and we will have fun together again. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours lovingly, Kajol
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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