Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Thanks to the modern world, all products become accessible in comparison to the past.
People
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can buy whatever they want by clicking the button on the internet. I am of the opinion that,
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negative
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.  Becoming more similar is negative
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mainly because it leads to
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a loss
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of national identity.
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, nations wear the same brands including Nike, Adidas and Mango, and make similar activities like reading and watching
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the film
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. In long run, traditional features
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trades and attitudes are neglected because habits have a significant effect on
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's tendencies. Cooking traditional meals would be a great example of that,
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are unlikely to less willing to cook those than past. 
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, it appears to me,
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similarity causes negative
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in tourism as well.
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who would like to see the other countries generally would like to become familiar with their cultural features
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as cuisine and customs. If these are accessible around the world,
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would lose their passion for
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.
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leads to detrimental consequences for countries where tourism is an important source of income.
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, there are those who post their traditional experiences on their blogs to share countries' unique sides with other
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or give some advice
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other
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. In conclusion, higher living standards are a crucial reason for the positive aspect of buying the same products all over the world.
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, because of the reasons that are mentioned in
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similarity causes more negative
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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