Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the modern world, all products become accessible in comparison to the past.
People
can buy whatever they want by clicking the button on the internet. I am of the opinion that, this
is more
negative Add an article
a more
development
.
Becoming more similar is negative development
mainly because it leads to loss
of national identity. Correct article usage
a loss
In other words
, nations wear the same brands including Nike, Adidas and Mango, and make similar activities like reading and watching Add an article
the film
a film
film
. In long run, traditional features Fix the agreement mistake
films
in particular
trades and attitudes are neglected because habits have a significant effect on people
's tendencies. Cooking traditional meals would be a great example of that, people
are unlikely to less willing to cook those than past.
Secondly
, it appears to me, this
similarity causes negative Correct word choice
that this
development
in tourism as well. People
who would like to see the other countries generally would like to become familiar with their cultural features such
as cuisine and customs. If these are accessible around the world, people
would lose their passion for traveling
. Change the spelling
travelling
This
leads to detrimental consequences for countries where tourism is an important source of income. For instance
, there are those who post their traditional experiences on their blogs to share countries' unique sides with other people
or give some advice for
other Change preposition
to
travelers
.
In conclusion, higher living standards are a crucial reason for the positive aspect of buying the same products all over the world. Change the spelling
travellers
However
, because of the reasons that are mentioned in this
essay, this
similarity causes more negative development
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