You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Mr Smith, I have completed a cooking
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in your school in 2021. I am writing
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letter to give a review of the
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. The
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thing I would like to mention is about the staff. The teachers were friendly with students and give practical knowledge in detail.
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, I would greatly appreciate the practical labs of an educational institute which allow students to do lab practice any time
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week. I am greatly thankful for enhancing my culinary skills in me. Since I have joined
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subject I learnt north Indian as well other cuisines like Italian food. At present , I am working in a five-star hotel as a chef. I would be thankful if you could take my advice for a new
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in your school. At present, schools are providing practical labs for Indian and Italian food but it would be great if the learning academy had a Chinese food
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because at present
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is in demand. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mark Jones
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