Writing task 1 general training -You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase Write letter to the company that you bought the clothing from.In your email -give details of the purchase Describe the problem -explain why you need a replacement urgently
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to raise a concern regarding the product
quality of my recent online purchase with your company. About the product
details, I bought 3 sets of jumpsuits from Daizy company with the product
ID R2P1X900 having a floral design in the medium size, and the order number was N2V2P2.
The major issue of this
purchase is the fabric quality as it is not the same as mentioned on the website. Also
, one of the suits I checked was torn from the other end. The other two pieces are not only of poor quality but also
shrink in size after one wash. Moreover
, I understand this
purchase was my wrong decision, as the colour got faint, due to
direct exposure to sunlight.
I requested another product
instead
of using torn piece because the other two I already used and I can understand they can't be replaced with fresh ones. I expect this
rearrangement as soon as possible due to
the graduation party at my school this
weekend.
I hope you understand this
matter and act on priority.
Sincerely,
Navdeep KaurSubmitted by knavdeep3011 on
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task achievement
In the second paragraph, mention that the suits were for a special occasion before describing the problem. This gives context and urgency to your request.
coherence cohesion
Double-check for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to improve clarity. For example, 'I requested another product instead of using torn piece' should be 'I requested a replacement for the torn piece.'
task achievement
The letter stays focused on the issue and provides clear details about the purchase and the problem encountered.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite yet firm, which is appropriate for this type of communication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite