Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? What is your view of this practice?
Environmental
damage
is increasing all across the globe. While some feel that it is the responsibility of the government
as well as big companies
to work hand-in-hand in tackling them, others argue that it is the job of individuals. This
essay will discuss why I completely agree that the responsibility, undoubtedly, lies on the shoulders of the authorities.
Before making my point, I would like to examine the argument of the opposing group. They feel that since communities are usually the main cause of certain environmental damages such
as deforestation and water pollution, they should be held accountable for undoing such
detrimental actions. This
is because citizens are the most affected when they fail to clean up or regrow vegetation therefore
, waiting for the government
companies
to do it for them seems rather counterproductive.
However
, many, myself included, are aware that the government
and bigger companies
, make the most resources. Therefore
, by using their resources gotten from taxes as well as from selling products, raising ten million dollars is not a big deal. Take the erosion damage
that left hundreds of Guatemalan people without a home, for example
. When the governor as well as CEOs
contributed a whooping sum of ten billion dollars not only did the repair of those homes but the reversal of Add the comma(s)
, as well as CEOs,
such
environmental damage
, took approximately two weeks which would have taken a gofundme program almost 6 months. Therefore
, the involvement of such
bodies is vital.
In conclusion, although
, some are of the opinion that people should the held responsible for damage
to the environment, others hold the government
and big companies
accountable. I believe that the authorities should be in charge as they have all the resources needed to reverse such
incidents.Submitted by sadiqfadila99 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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