Some people believe that the government should make university education free for all. Others disagree and say students should pay for their own education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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is considered a primary right of citizens, many people argue on the fact that government should make university
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free for all while some disagree that
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should bear their own
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expenses. In my opinion, every citizen has the right to free training and the law should take the necessary steps to provide the same.
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, we will discuss both views in detail in the below paragraph. Nowadays, the fees of university courses have touched the sky. It becomes difficult to pay for the fees for parents of these
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who are not financially stable.
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, authorities or institutions provide scholarships for
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scholars based on merit but these are very less in number. To overcome
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situations these scholars work part-time to fund their courses which might impact their grades.
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, A student working in one coffee shop had decent scores before she started working, but due to her part-time job, her grades became less competent in class which in turn affected her overall concentration and performance and eventually led to stress and anxiety.
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, on-job training has its own benefits apart from earning money. It is quite beneficial for these
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to get a job which will serve both purposes of learning practical knowledge and funding college fees.
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helps them to develop good communication skills and learn about the working culture of specific industries.
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, a job in the same major will work wonders for these graduates. To conclude, funding college expenses and working while completing a university degree has its own benefits but might
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impact overall
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grades. Government should take initiatives to waive off some amount of expense for
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or offer student loans with low rates of interest so that they can afford their specialization degrees.
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