In the past, people used to get information from books. These days more and more people get it from the internet. Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples.

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Nowadays technology involves everything in our life. So, some group of
people
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saying that in the
last
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decade’s most of the population use to update their selves on the internet, while, in the
past
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people
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was searching their
information
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in the
books
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, from my point of view I
agree
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onagree
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this
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statement. In
this
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essay
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I will look
online
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at online
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information
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is
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that is
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popular
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more popular
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than
books
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where used
in
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for
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an
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ages.
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,
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affirmation is really true when we are looking
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our modern situation, cyber
information
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is very cheap cost, and available
in
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everywhere,
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why
people
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tend to use websites to be up to date
in
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every side of life like
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education, news, health tips, business and etcetera.
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, when we were in
the
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school server
information
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’s where not accessible as it is now, we were going to the library to search
our
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for our
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assignments in ten different
books
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. But, today students find anything they want while they are
on
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in
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their bed.
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, there
is
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a few
people
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more
people
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who still gain their knowledge in the
books
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, and to be precise the online sources are reliable. Because, every person will write whatever he/she
want
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wants
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whether it is right or wrong, so
the
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confidentiality is more like to
be bias
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be biased
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.
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, there is a teacher who was lazy, and gets his exams on the internet question and answers,
is
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it
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would be ok if he takes only questions
their
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there
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and answer his knowledge but no he was using
to
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it to
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correct the answer that he got from the online, and that was far from the right answers as
result
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a result
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of that whole student were been failed,
then
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university
search
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searches
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the reason why all the student fail after days they found out the cause behind
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tragedy. In conclusion,
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information
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the information
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highway is something that makes our way of life easy and very convenient, since you are utilizing a
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trustworthy
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trust worthy
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trustworthy
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web
pages
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page
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.
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