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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books becuase they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Printed versions of
books
 and newspapers are replaced with digital ones and they are freely available for
people
 in the early future. I completely agree with that.
Technology
 improvement and lower
cost
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for
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of
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producing
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production
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 support
this
 idea which will be discussed in
this
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Firstly
, improvement in
technology
 makes a wide range of information accessible
for
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to
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people
.
In addition
, it provides circumstances
which
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in which
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 data
release
 so fast and
with
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at
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low
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a low
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 price or even free.
For example
, nowadays authors write their
books
 easily and
release
 them quickly through the internet,
which
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and
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 most of them are free. If
technology
 improves
countinously
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continuously
,
people
 will have
this
 opportunity to read
freely
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books
 and newspapers online.
Secondly
,
write
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 and
publish
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publishing
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paper
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a paper
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version
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versions
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 of
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the document
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document
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documents
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 are increasing day by day, so it
encurages
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encourages
 individuals and companies to use and
release
 online versions.
In other words
, the lower cost of producing
in
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an
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 online version interests readers
buy
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to buy
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 digital
books
 and newspapers and
consequently
, companies prefer to
release
 digital
version
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versions
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. In conclusion,
technology
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technological
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 development and lower price of
producing
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production
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 will make
people
to
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apply
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read online freely.
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