Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Jane,

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, I have moved to Madrid! You know I have been informing you about my intention to move to a new city since January

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year,

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, I eventually did

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Saturday. Actually, you would agree with me that I have complained to you on several occasions about how noisy Barcelona is, and even worse for someone like me living in the city centre.

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, the sound of airplanes keeps me and my children awake at night and it is affecting our health badly. Well, I can't describe to you enough how lovely

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my new place is but it would please you to know that I now live close to a small village in Madrid, with proximity to the mountains and lakes,

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, a good location to relax and go hiking over the weekend.

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, there is a nearby beach where one can visit in the noon. I believe you are going to enjoy it here too.

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, I would love to invite you to a weekend dinner at my place so that you can come and see for yourself. I promise to host you to lovely meals and local dishes available here. I look forward to seeing you again. Warm wishes, Moses.

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Consider elaborating more on the reasons for moving to make your letter even more compelling.

coherence cohesion

Double-check minor grammatical errors and ensure consistency in tense usage.

coherence cohesion

Clear and logical structure with well-organized paragraphs.

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Friendly and inviting tone throughout the letter, suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Effective use of greeting and closing, enhancing the overall feel of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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