Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People

have different views about whether

success

comes from hardworking and

determination

or from

money

and

appearance

. While a spirit of hardworking and

determination

can sometimes be useful, I believe that

money

and

appearance

are more important. On the one hand, hardworking and

determination

can be a great foundation for

success

for children. When teachers use homework or assignment to let students do a lot of practice, it is a lesson for everyone to know that you will get better if you work really hard.

This

kind of practice may help to build children’s good habits of hardworking and

determination

while pushing them to repeat it in the future. When they enter the workplace, these two spirits would certainly help them to have a good performance in a competitive situation. It can

therefore

be argued that hardworking and

determination

should be the important factors to

success

.

On the other hand

, it is perhaps even more important to be a

success

for the many aspects of adult life that require

money

and a good

appearance

.

First

and foremost, a wealthy family could afford a child to go to private school and overseas study tours, which gives them a head start in life. It does not only help them to gain knowledge from different places but

also

build a relationship with the

people

who are in the same class.

Furthermore

, it is undeniable that some

people

have a good physical

appearance

that makes them successful.

For instance

, it would be a good chance for candidates to seek a job if they have a good-looking

appearance

, which is a key element apart from skills and experiences.

As a result

,

money

and a good

appearance

would give them more opportunities to show their talents and skills in order to achieve their long-term goals in different situations. In conclusion, I can understand why

people

might believe hard work and

determination

is important to be a

success

, but it seems to me that

money

and

appearance

are much more desirable in adult life.