Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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have different views about whether

success

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comes from hardworking and

determination

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or from

money

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and

appearance

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. While a spirit of hardworking and

determination

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can sometimes be useful, I believe that

money

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and

appearance

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are more important. On the one hand, hardworking and

determination

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can be a great foundation for

success

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for children. When teachers use homework or assignment to let students do a lot of practice, it is a lesson for everyone to know that you will get better if you work really hard.

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kind of practice may help to build children’s good habits of hardworking and

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while pushing them to repeat it in the future. When they enter the workplace, these two spirits would certainly help them to have a good performance in a competitive situation. It can

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be argued that hardworking and

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should be the important factors to

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.

On the other hand

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, it is perhaps even more important to be a

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for the many aspects of adult life that require

money

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and a good

appearance

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.

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and foremost, a wealthy family could afford a child to go to private school and overseas study tours, which gives them a head start in life. It does not only help them to gain knowledge from different places but

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build a relationship with the

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who are in the same class.

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, it is undeniable that some

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have a good physical

appearance

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that makes them successful.

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, it would be a good chance for candidates to seek a job if they have a good-looking

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, which is a key element apart from skills and experiences.

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,

money

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and a good

appearance

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would give them more opportunities to show their talents and skills in order to achieve their long-term goals in different situations. In conclusion, I can understand why

people

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might believe hard work and

determination

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is important to be a

success

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, but it seems to me that

money

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and

appearance

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are much more desirable in adult life.