The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for travelling in the us in 2009
Both graphs provided tackle the subject of people’s movements from one place to another in the US in 2009. The provided bar graph shows the rationales behind
travelers’
movements, whilst the pie Change the spelling
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demonstrates the major problems that challenged public travelers
.
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Overall
, it can be witnessed from the bar chart
that the highest percentage of traveling
was for commuting to and from work, Change the spelling
travelling
whereas
the least percentage was for visiting families and friends. However
, in the pie chart
the greatest problem encountered by people was the pricing of the Add a comma
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travels
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travel
while
the minor problem faced by travelers
was the space of pedestrian lanes.
Regarding the line Change the spelling
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chart
, on the one hand, it is clear that
social activities of visiting relatives and recreations
have recorded the lowest percentages (6% and 10% respectively), but Fix the agreement mistake
recreation
traveling
for shopping hit a percentage equal to the sum of these 2 percentages (16%) which was slightly less Change the spelling
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that
the number of people travelling for personal reasons (19%). Correct your spelling
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On the other hand
, the greatest ranking of people was for commuting reasons to and from work (49%).
Concerning the pie chart
, price of the travel recorded
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problems reported against aggressive drivers (17%) and safety concerns issues (19%). Meanwhile, space for pedestrians and access to public transport scored marginal percentages (6% and 8% respectively).Change preposition
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