In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have morw opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In these past few ,years there is a gradual increase in study abroad due to the scholarships and in some cases free education
this
is a good thing it will encourage students to study more and become competitive to go do a degree outside of the country
additionally
some people
also
think having degree outside the country can add an additional value when going for a job. To start with having a degree outside the country can help the students get international exposure which will help them in their survival and
also
they will know how to solve problems in different situations
furthermore
they will how the education system works in that kingdom
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A student studying in India will be learning from books and teachers explain each and every topic but when he goes out for
further
studies
then
he will know how to study on his own and get his concepts clear using PowerPoint presentations. The
second
point is the student who will be going for academics outside he will be getting to meet with different types of students which means he will make friends with members who came from other kingdoms
for example
if an Indian student is going to apply in France
then
he will be meeting a friend from England, France, Italy etc. To conclude with there are more advantages compared to the demerits but the major demerit of going outside to get graduated is the person will leave his parents back and
also
the home countries economy goes down if more number of go-to abroad but
on the other hand
people will get more international exposure and come back to homeland after completion of graduation and use the skills which he acquired to develop the Homeland economy
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