A builder has recently completed some renovations at your house, but you are not happy with his work.write a letter to him.In your letter, Tell him what work has not been done properly Tell him what you want him to do Suggest some times when you will be available at home

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to complain about the renovation work of my home which is not properly done according to my plan. The

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thing I would like to tell you is that I wanted grey colour cabinets in the

kitchen

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, In one bedroom we wanted multicolour lights for a special occasion. I would greatly appreciate it if you could change the cabinet of the

kitchen

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because black is not matching with walls of the

kitchen

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,please could you fix different colours of lights in a bedroom since my children do not like white light in a room.

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, a tap in a

kitchen

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is not working properly. We did not get hot water from it. So, please could you check

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issue. I would be thankful if you could come

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weekend because at that time I will be at home and we will review everything and fix it. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mark Jones

komal03892

Jul 6, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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