There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and invite your friend, explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it's important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.
Dear Rohan,
Hello ! I hope you and your family members are fine during
this
covid19 period. I am writing this
letter to invite you for
our traditional celebration.
As I remember you Change preposition
to
was
told me that you have Unnecessary verb
apply
interest
in Indian culture and you are doing Correct article usage
an interest
study
for Add an article
a study
the study
this
subject. Moreover
, we will celebrated
my big brother's wedding on 25th November . There are many Change the verb form
celebrate
ceremony
celebrated Change to a plural noun
ceremonies
such
as on 21st November "mehndi" events and on 22 November garba
night and we will wear our traditional dresses on Change the capitalization
Garba
garbage
this
day. In addition
, on final
wedding Add an article
the final
day
we will dance on my Add a comma
,day
brother
vargodo .it's Change noun form
brother's
very
interesting celebration and Correct article usage
a very
also
teach our costumes that you also
enjoy this events
and it's very useful for Change the determiner
this event
these events
next
study presentations.
Finally
, you will also
come in
one week in advance so we will go to my hometown. I hope you enjoy Change preposition
apply
this
celebration.
I hope
meet see you soon
Warm wishes,
RahiAdd the particle
tohope
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite