There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and invite your friend, explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it's important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

Dear Rohan, Hello ! I hope you and your family members are fine during
this
covid19 period. I am writing
this
letter to invite you
for
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our traditional celebration. As I remember you
was
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told me that you have
interest
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in Indian culture and you are doing
study
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a study
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for
this
subject.
Moreover
, we will
celebrated
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my big brother's wedding on 25th November . There are many
ceremony
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celebrated
such
as on 21st November "mehndi" events and on 22 November
garba
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night and we will wear our traditional dresses on
this
day.
In addition
, on
final
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wedding
day
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we will dance on my
brother
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vargodo .it's
very
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interesting celebration and
also
teach our costumes that you
also
enjoy
this events
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and it's very useful for
next
study presentations.
Finally
, you will
also
come
in
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one week in advance so we will go to my hometown. I hope you enjoy
this
celebration. I
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meet see you soon Warm wishes, Rahi
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