More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
People have their own view and opinion about
a
different situation and Correct article usage
apply
this
enormous believe
of those people apply to their Replace the word
belief
car
.This
time i
actually think Change the capitalization
I
trust
your Wrong verb form
trusting
car
is a
right Correct article usage
the
Change the verb form
thinks
think
to do but Correct your spelling
thing
overheat
Wrong verb form
overheating
it
can cause several Correct pronoun usage
apply
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
contrast
many people.
Change to a plural noun
contrasts
Firstly
, there will be a lot of traffic jam
on the road and Fix the agreement mistake
jams
Correct article usage
the bridge
bridge
can cause Fix the agreement mistake
bridges
many
trouble for the police.Replace the quantifier
much
Secondly
, If your car
have
any broken part, tires, Change the verb form
has
Correct your spelling
wheelchair
wheel chair
, passenger seat, Correct your spelling
wheelchair
the
Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
luggage
luggages
storage or even the engine so you have to take your Change the wording
luggage
pieces of luggage
items of luggage
car
to the engineer to fix it which takes a lot of time.For example
, on an important day
you have a serious solving meeting that needs you to the presenter for a situation and your Add a comma
,day
car
broke thenn
Correct your spelling
then
next
what are you going to do?.Thirdly
,you will have to wait before you go without your car
if you lend your friend or your parent have your car
and you have to patient wait
them to the return time so you can go.Add the preposition
forwait
This
kind of problem can be solve
if you decrease Change the verb form
be solved
the
trust of yourself Change the word
your
to
your Change preposition
in
car
for little
and have some faith Correct article usage
a little
with
other transport.
To summarise, I think the problem is Change preposition
in
an
easy Correct article usage
apply
solving
but Change the verb form
to solve
need
Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
the
help Correct article usage
apply
by
everyone to make Change preposition
from
this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite