The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs demonstrate how distinctive the existing ground
floor
of a house in
plan
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the plan
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compared
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is compared
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with
proposed
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the proposed
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changes. Looking at the picture,
it is clear that
remarkable changes have taken place on the existing
floor
for reconstruction purposes.
Overall
, the new proposal has more
function
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functional
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arrangements. On the West of the
floor
, there will be more kitchen furniture displayed in the kitchen
room
,
while
the other in
this
room
will be still remained
such
as the two windows and the entrance on the North-west of the
floor
. Once, the internal wall to the East of the
room
which divides the living
room
and the stair will be demolished, the space of the living
room
will be likely extended. In the
center
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centre
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of the
floor
, after the stay-still entrance, two internal doors will be knocked down and replaced by the internal wall which rebuilt on two sides
at the end
of the corridor to the North of the
floor
.
Besides
, the hall
next
to the kitchen
room
in the centre will be disappeared and be replaced by the extended stairs along the
center
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centre
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to the North of the
floor
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words floor, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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