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Children do not concentrate and School what is the cause and what is the solution

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Many people maintain that it is problem that juveniles can not concentrate in class. In my opinion, not only using a smartphone in the wrong way but
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 their disordered
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 in the house could be caused. In order to solve
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 problem, schools and parents need to make students refrain from using cell phones and keep their
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 ordered, respectively.
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, focusing on the cause that juveniles can not keep concentration in school,
smartphones
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 could divert them from classes. It is true that the mobile phone is a substantial convenient tool if it is used correctly for learning: searching for new words and making the amount of study visible.
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, modern
children
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 often use cell phones for inappropriate purposes in school
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 as chatting with friends online during the progress of lessons. Another main factor is their unstable
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 custom.
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, some participate in club activities without breakfast and take classes with them lack of sleep. Research shows that these ways of
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 have a negative influence on concentration.
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, moving on to the solution to the problem, schools have to reinforce limits on utilizing
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.
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, they prohibit students from operating devices except for use relevant to learning.
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, it would be effective to prohibit taking
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 in the school itself. Regarding
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's
life
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, parents need to encourage them to sleep early and eat food in the morning. In most
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cases,
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 are not aware of the importance of appropriate customs.
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 why adults need to enlighten them. In conclusion, it is the primary catalyst to undermining
children
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's concentration to use
smartphones
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 excessively and leave their disordered of
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 custom. As solutions, schools and parents need to prevent students from using mobile phones in class and keep their
life
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 ordered in the household, respectively.
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