Children do not concentrate in School what is the cause and what is the solution
The problem with schools nowadays is that they don't spark
children
's attention
anymore, leading to a lack
of concentration. This
essay will discuss how teachers are delivering boring presentations and the lack
of interesting topics
taught. This
essay will also
suggest solutions to these problems including new ways of interactive teaching and allowing pupil's to choose the topics
they study.
Two causes of lack
of concentration are: old ways of teaching and lack
of choice
for the students. Teachers have not evolved enough over the past 50 years, they still teach children
through talking at the front of the class and using a whiteboard. Moreover
, the subjects taught at school
are old, boring, and sleep-inducing. For example
, most children
do not care about Victorian England, or the study of rocks and waterfalls, they care more about IT, coding and other new skills.
Two solutions to said problems are: changing the style of teaching and allowing choice
of subjects studied at school
. With the advancement of technology this
opens a whole new world of teaching. For example
using interactive diagrams and games aimed to teach specific topics
. Integrating this
, although
not cheap, could help maintain students attention
for longer. Furthermore
, changing the syllabus of schools, especially at secondary school
level, to include more choice
for kids will lead to them studying what they love and paying more attention
.
In conclusion, children
are finding it increasingly difficult to pay attention
in school
. This
is due to the unevolved style of teaching along with the coma-inducing topics
taught. These problems could easily be solved by teachers using modern teaching techniques, especially technology, and by allowing the pupils choice
of subjects taught to them will improve concentration.Submitted by h_alchalabi on
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