Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Other believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Large

cities

are rapidly increasing numbers of buildings in order to meet the demands of people flowing in. It is argued that

further

construction should be regulated by governments.

However

,

this

issue

is disagreed

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that it would violate human rights, and constrict new innovation, while others

supporting

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support

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aruges

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argues

that

government

regulation would maintain

aesthetic

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the aesthetic

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of the

city

. In my opinion, I disagree

on

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with

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government

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the government

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taking complete control of building

desings

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designs

design

.

Firstly

looking

from

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one of the main reasons behind the disagreement,

it

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points out

on

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the issue

regrading

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regarding

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to individual rights.

Building

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design is a form of 3D medium,

which

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in which

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ideas and expressions of people are made. But with

government

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the government

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overwriting

this

freedom,

it

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could

consequently

harm the voice of creators. Another major point of

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argument

arugment

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argument

is that

this

regulation would constrict innovative

desings

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designs

.

For instance

, in

Singapore

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,Singapore

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there is a building called Marina Bay Sand where a boat is designed on top of three

sky scrapers

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skyscrapers

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.

Such

an exquisite design would not have been created with strict

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ruling

culling

rulling

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ruling

by the

government

. On

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the

ther

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the

other hand, others may highly support

government

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control

controll

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control

for the reasons of maintaining the aesthetic of

big

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city

. Each

cities

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city

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has been known

from

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for

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the different vibe

that is

created from the

designs

of the building.

For example

, Kyoto a

city

in Japan is famous for having buildings with traditional Japanese

designs

. Not only does

this

maintains the

city

culture, but it has become a great part of tourism. Despite the argument, it is rare to have big

cities

like Kyoto with

a uniformed building

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uniformed building designs

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designs

.

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Moreover

Moroever

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However

, a change in the building styles may be

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necessary

necessarily

necessarly

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necessary

at times, in order to welcome new ideas. In conclusion,

although

lack of

government

control over building

designs

can be a threat

for

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to

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cities

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loosing

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losing

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its

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their

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cultural significance, I think

this

outweighs the importance of people in the community to have their own voice in forms of building

designs

and to create new original

designs

.