Recently you noticed that the waste (garbage) disposal in your area is creating problems. Write a letter complaining about the situation to the environment officer. * The time of waste pickup. * What is the problem with the waste. * Suggest solution to the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navneet Kaur, I live at Winters Crescent, Collingwood. I am writing
this
letter to express my concern related to the disposal pickup in my area. For the last
few months, the garbage truck is not regular in my town.
I observed the heaps of garbage lying in the colony. During the night time, people observed numerous dogs on the garbage heaps. This
has relentless pernicious effects on the health of people because it has led to the generation of harmful insects such
as flies and mosquitos.
I would be obliged if you could look into this
matter immediately. The society members are facing subsequent troubles and a lot of children fell sick last
week. I wrote a letter two weeks ago but never got any response. People pay taxes regularly, hence
this
matter needs to be solved immediately.
Waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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task achievement
Your letter is well structured. However, providing more specific details about the frequency of the irregular waste pickup and its exact timing would enhance the completeness of your response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a singular idea. For instance, separating the issues caused by the waste from the potential health consequences could improve clarity.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and suitable tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The closing and opening of the letter are appropriate and respectful.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite