Working patterns have changed a lot. Now many people work online from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this way of working.
It is well
acknowleged
that technology progression, Correct your spelling
acknowledged
acknowledge
changes
peoples
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people's
lifestyle
and job Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
behaviors
. After the introduction and expansion of the Change the spelling
behaviours
internet
, job patterns have changed significantly. Nowadays, many people
work online from their homes. These changes
of
work patterns have revolutionized some carriers in a Change preposition
in
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positive
possitive
way, Correct your spelling
positive
besides
its drawbacks to some other jobs. In this
essay
I will discuss Add a comma
,essay
pros
and cons of online jobs and give my point of view.
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the pros
In
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On
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
internet
has Add an article
the internet
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brought
braught
comfort and ease to Correct your spelling
brought
communities
lives. Change noun form
communities'
community's
For instance
, these days many purchases are done online. This
means less Correct your spelling
communication
communicaton
, less traffic and more Correct your spelling
communication
time saving
. As many classes are held online, Add a hyphen
time-saving
this
has solved the problem of distance between teachers and students and this
is precious for improvement
of general education and for Correct article usage
the improvement
societies
culture. Change noun form
society's
In addition
, many people
can run their own business with a very small amount of money, hence
, unemployment decreases in these fields.
on the other
hand
we can consider Add a comma
,hand
withdraws
of online carriers. To illustrate, Replace the word
withdrawal
market
is not only a place to buy goods. it is Add an article
the market
also
a place for individual's
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individual
face to face
interaction and Add a hyphen
face-to-face
these communication
, lessens Change the determiner
this communication
these communications
peoples
anxiety and loneliness. Change noun form
people's
Virtual
world has made many Add an article
The virtual
people
lonelier than before and some are nearly detached from real
world. Add an article
the real
Furthermore
, many crimes can take place via online shopping. For instance
, people
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receive
recieve
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receive
allert
messages from Correct your spelling
alert
police
, not to trust all these internet_based shops. Correct article usage
the police
Moreover
, many Correct your spelling
businesses
buisnesses
that could not cope with new Correct your spelling
businesses
changes
are closed everyday
. to give an example, some traditional sellers that are not interested in Replace the word
every day
internet
, can not Add an article
the internet
compete
modern Add the preposition
forcompete
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businesses
buisnesses
and have to end their Correct your spelling
businesses
carriers
.
In conclusion, alteration of job patterns after the development of Correct your spelling
careers
internet
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the internet
,
was inevitable and Remove the comma
apply
have
changed Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
social interactions Correct article usage
apply
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magnificently
significantly
magnificantly
. I believe these Correct your spelling
significantly
changes
will continue and in spite of their negative effects, their Correct your spelling
benefits
benifits
overweigh their disadvantages. There is no chance Correct your spelling
benefits
for
inhibiting Change preposition
of
technology
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technological
changes
. All we can do is to
cope with them. Government and Fix the infinitive
apply
people
should take some actions to reduce the harms of online jobs like any other harms of new technologies.Submitted by mohaddesehfathollahi1997 on
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