Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, tending for similarity to the community is increasing
thus
, every product around the world is accessible and it can be bought by
public
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.
For instance
, by appearing online shops more and more, and advertising their goods on social media people are able to order their ideal thing at any time and easily in every situation and location. Obviously,
this
issue has beneficial sides while there are negatives either. On one hand, countries try to reduce differences between nations and
society
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with various nationalities can be close to each other and try to bring peace to the world in]
this
way.
Therefore
, little by little living without borders would create similarity.
In addition
, in the past, the number of products was limited or even inaccessible. Today thanks to globalization and increasing relationships among countries by importing and exporting goods or services, everything is available in any region and people can be owned whatever they want.
By contrast
, tending to similarity can destroy a country's legacies, historical
culture
, dresses, products, ceremonies and so on if all the societies tend to be alike. People are always interested in another country's
culture
and try to wear or treat like a member of
this
culture
. For
this
reason, it can damage local
culture
or products. In conclusion, being as same as each other is an unstoppable issue which is beneficial to reducing differences and wars.
However
, it could be a danger to a nation's
culture
, in that case,
this
critical heritage must be protected from other side effects and threats
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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