In general, our
life
can separate into 2 sides, professional
lives
and personal
lives
.
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taking
risks
on both sides may be important for our
life
. In my opinion, I think that having
risks
will have advantages rather than disadvantages.
Firstly
, every problem that we are facing,
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is a problem that forced our
life
in a good direction,
although
most
people
like to have a peaceful
life
like their dream. Practically, most
people
will meet
this
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of
risks
in
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lives
.
For instance
,
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from your job, customer
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your work, and
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that come from an
.
Thus
, when we can achieve
this
problem, believe that your skill must improve absolutely.
Secondly
, every
people
always hate bore feeling which can lead to depression.
However
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is, adding some
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your
life
. It
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not have to be a high-risk activity. Sometimes, we want a few extra
to make our personal
lives
more exciting.
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you have to do the same things
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from morning until
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.
However
, you can
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some risk, whether try new restaurants, new activities, and new friends. These are the easiest way to
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your
life
which will make
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life
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fluctuate.
To sum up, some
people
will see
risks
as
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.
However
,
risks
also
have advantages too whereas in personal live or professional
lives
.
Risks
will bring an improvement to your skill.
Also
,
make
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your boring personal
life
by
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some
.