A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Request some advice about a gift for his/her family • Ask about activities and clothing in his/her country • Find out about the food
Dear Liza,
I
hope
this
letter finds you well. I am so excited that you invited me to your country
. I am writing to request help from you about your country
Firstly
,I would like to buy a gift for your family. If I am not wrong last
month was your parent's anniversary. I will buy them a wonderful present for their anniversary. I hope
they will like it. Then
I will get a present for you also
.
Secondly
, I wanted to know what people wear more in your country
because I have not decided what to wear yet. I heard a lot about your country
's clothing and most people were saying that the traditional clothes of your country
are the most popular so I would like to try it on when i
will be there. Change the capitalization
I
Moreover
,I also
heard that in your country
there are activities that make your travel more dramatic and lovely.I would like to go to the sightseeing places and I hope
it will be memorable
holiday
Add an article
a memorable
Lastly
,I wanted to know more about food in your country
. Because these days most countries have awful foods and I don't want to become a victim of this
.In addition
to
I Change preposition
apply
hope
you will take me to the most likely places to get a normal and delicious food
I look forward to hearing from you soon and getting more information about your country
.
Can not wait to meet you soon.
Your
sincerely,
Jumaniyozova JasminaCorrect the word
Yours
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single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. For example, the paragraph asking about activities can be separated from the paragraph discussing clothing.
logical structure
Consider revising the sentence structures to improve logical structure. For instance, 'In addition to I hope you will take me to the most likely places to get a normal and delicious food' could be rephrased for clarity.
suitable writing tone
You've maintained a friendly and appropriate tone throughout the letter, which suits the purpose of the writing task.
complete response
You responded to all parts of the task, including requesting advice about a gift, asking about activities and clothing, and inquiring about the food.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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