The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are advantage and disadvantages to having one language In the world?

Tourism trading due to globalisation are growing these decades ,so , there is a significant needed to know
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research studies have been done by the Austrian scientists where the
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of other nationalities to visit more again from Austria and these tourists have been stated that the convenient communication with local
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has been fallen and passengers who can speak
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others, alongside, others have been trying to learn
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language
for dealing with their demands. To summarize,
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worldwide due to
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of tourists who are needed to common
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however
,
this
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as accelerating interpersonal relationship between nations ,
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fluently.
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