Some people think it's better women can join army navy and Air forces. Give advantages and disadvantages of this
It is commonly believed that women place more importance on gender equality than men
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governmental sector,while,others hold the opposite point of view.Linking Words
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essay will consider both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence.
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To begin
with, females are successful in all sections that they enter like politics, the legal system etc.as well as management and leadership roles, female leaders show great success in terms.Females are having better cognitive and communication skills, which is quite helpful while planning for the war. Linking Words
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,ladies have the required dedication, determination and support that armies need so why should we deprive them of serving their beloved countries.Linking Words
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, in Lebanon, girls are allowed to be in both the police and the army. they are succeeding because of their personalities.
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, there are many reasons to not offer them jobs in the navy and army. Linking Words
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, they are not as physically strong as men, as these kinds of jobs require.To illustrate - Army personnel are required to carry heavy equipment in the everyday course. Linking Words
As a result
, women do not get priority in the forces for these specific reasons.Linking Words
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, the people in combat have to live far away from their homes in extreme conditions which can cause mental trauma. Males are naturally stronger and can live in tough situations as compared to females. Linking Words
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- they have to spend months without a proper diet and food.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...